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Have You Established Your Main Character At The Start?
by: Nick Vernon
In the beginning of your story you have to grab your readers’ interest
and sustain it till the end. Our hook is our character. Readers support on
reading to find out much just about the character. To see what he’ll do in the
story; how he’ll solve his problems. What his goals are and whether he’ll
accomplish them.
And because our character is the reason readers become hooked on our
stories, establishing him at the start is a must in a short story. And it
is essential to establish him at the start because we don’t have the
capacity in our limited word length to introduce him at our leisure.
The bond between readers and character has to be developed about
immediately.
You mightiness have a few characters though. How do you decide who your main
character wish be? A main character is one that drives the story.
Think of it this way… If we were to take him away, there wish be no
story because it’s his story we are telling. The story wish unfold by what
is happening or what has happened to him.
When you establish who your main character wish be, the next thing to
do is to find which of your characters is in the better position to tell the
story. Wish your main character tell his story or wish you give that role
to another character?
This is what we call Viewpoint and what we’ll see in much detail in
legal proceeding chapters.
Your main character isn’t necessarily the one who is telling the story;
he mightiness not even as appear in our story ‘physically’ but wish be there
through the thoughts of others. So the viewpoint character mightiness be a
secondary character.
Whoever is telling the story is the viewpoint character.
The viewpoint character gives the coloring of the story. Any this
characters says, we wish believe. It may or may not be true, according to
the main character, but because he isn’t there ‘physically’ to voice his
opinions, we wish have to take the viewpoint character’s word for it.
In a novel you can play about with viewpoint. You can have some
viewpoint characters. In a short story it works better with one.
So your main character, whether he’ll be telling his own story or
person else wish be doing it for him, has to be established at the start
of your story.
Having aforesaid that, let’s see the reasons why the main character may not
be telling his own story...
Possibly our main character is one that readers won’t sympathize or
sympathize with.
Or the main character wish not view extremely
with our readers
Or the viewpoint character knows all the facts and can tell the
story better
Etc.
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Let me give you an example of a secondary character telling the story
of a main character…
Let’s say your secondary character is a head-shrinker and the main
character is the patient. Depending on what’s going to go on in the story,
we’ll have to choose who’s in a better position to tell it. In this case,
I wish choose the psychiatrist.
I’ve done this because the patient is confused, being the one with the
problems. The head-shrinker knows all the facts and his opinions wish do
things clearer to readers.
So, as the secondary character (the psychiatrist) unravels the story,
we’ll become involved in the main character because it’s the main
character’s story that is been told.
This may get a little confusing to the beginner writer. As they write
they wish have to support in mind that the secondary character, although he’s
telling the story, is NOT our main character.
The secondary character is there to do perform a task. He’s only the
voice. It’s the main character we’ll become involved with.
A secondary character doesn’t play such an important role as a main
character does. Therefore, information just about secondary characters should
be unbroken
to a minimum. It’s not his story – it’s the main character’s story
and the spotlight must, most times, be unbroken
on the main character.
Take the above example for instance. It’s no relevancy to the story how
the head-shrinker started his career or wherever
he received his sheepskin –
what’s important, is what he has to say just about the main character, his
patient.
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Introduce your main character straight away, as close to the beginning
of the story that’s possible. Change your readers to form a bond and that
wish support them hooked.
Is your main character established at the start of your story?
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